Rach: In a desperate attempt to self advertise my new RPG that Tami and I
created, Tri, from the ever so cool Gundam: Cracked Image, shall be
reviewing!

Tri: Yo! ^_^

Senshi: Azrael, Archangelus Senshi of Death

Earth Name: Leah Bara Noe

Emiko: Yay! Normal name!

Rach: Oh, YES! YES YES YES! Auto-accept! I have a friend whose last name
is Boe. ^^

Percy: That had to do with what?

Tri: *Shrugs*Go fig.

Meaning: Leah-weary (Hebrew) 

Bara- to choose (Hebrew) 

Noe-rest (Spanish)

Roughly "the weary choose rest"

Emiko: Interesting. And cool.

Rach: Ooo... 

Percy: I'm weary.

Tri: I'm always resting. ^^

Age: 16

Birthdate: April 20th 

Emiko: Hmm.... we already have people born April 13th and 16th.

Tami: Yeah! Like the eeevil forces of Jace!

Tri: *Cackles*Hey Jace, remember what we did to Wufei..?

Rach: Don't bring that up, dear. Yes, change the date. Please.

Astrological Sign: Taurus

Blood Type: A-

Emiko: Why don't we get more Os and Bs?

Rach: Because O's are eccentric and B's are nervous or something. I dunno,
I don't do blood types.

Family: Prof. Benen (noble) Noe- father- 47, Professor of History at Roanoke College. Pri's daddu was born and raised in Roanoke where his father , grand-father, great-grand father, etc. where raised. Benen is a small man standing about 5'7 with a mousy appearance, blue eyes, and blond hair. He is very intelligent and fun loving guy, making him a favorite with everyone. He also has an ancestor that was a successful pirate.

Dr. Tristessa (bold) Noe- mother- 46, ER doctor. Mrs. Cubitus is quite the opposite of her husband in looks. She is 5'9 with an open face, short blond, and penetrating blue eyes. She originally came form Savannah, Georgia and still has a thick southern accent. She is a outspoken woman and very protective of her child.

Emiko: We seem to be getting a lot of doctors, too. Can I ask for less?

Tri: Hun, you can order less, you own the thing!

Felice: I'm a doctor! ^^

Percy: And a nuisance.

School: North Cross, 12th grade 

Emiko: We're starting to get more of them. Isn't that nice? Reminder to self: add more high schools.

Rach: Yah, that would be smart. We need variety!

Likes: baseball, classical music, anything that has to do with plagues or pirates, irony, chess

Dislikes: modern music, people who will not leave her alone, dogs (they hate her she hates them), children

Fav. Food: lambchops

Emiko: Ahhhhh! ::hides:: Not the cute widdle wambs!

Percy: *Smacks lips hungrily*

Tri: What is so cute about something that bleats?

Rach: *Holds up a sign saying: 'Let the lambs bleat!'*

Hated Food: boiled carrots

Rach: ^^, yummy!

Tri and Percy: Ugh, gross.

Fav. Subject: Ancient History

Hated Subject: Computer Programming

Color: black (big surprise there, hun?)

Emiko: Once in a while I want a big surprise.... Like the Dark Universalis wears all white. Ha!

Rach: I am so sick of people connection black to death. Why not try dark
purple? Red? Dirty brown? Hell, even white or gold. It could represent
Heaven, which is a part of death technically.

Tri: How spiritual.

Hobbies: Watching baseball, playing chess, playing the piano, grounds keeping for the local church

Tri: My daddy was a priest! ^__^

Aspirations: She wants to be archeologist (smell the dust)

Emiko: Gee, that's cropped up a few times, too. Wierd.

Rach: Isn't it spelled weird?

Emiko: ::grumbles::

Tri: It has? I didn't see.

Percy: It has.

Gemstone: Bloodstone

Rach: That word gives me the 'wiggies'. *Snickers at Wade*

Leta: WADE! *Huggles him*

History- Leah was born and raised in Roanoke in a large house that had belonged to her family for generations which was thought to be built by Leah's ancestor, the pirate Red Eye. The house is across the street from a small church and graveyard. Ever since Leah was young she was a well behaved little girl that was well liked even if she was a loner. Her parents where very strict about using manners and being respectful so most adults though she was a darling.

When she was fourteen she started working for the church next door as a grounds keeper for the grave yard, because her mom volunteered her for the job. Mrs. Noe thought that a job would do Leah good and since that job was near to home Leah could still get her homework done. When she started high school she supprised everyone by making the baseball (not softball mind you) team as the catcher. 

One day when she was cleaning out a her basement Leah found a false wall. She found on the other side of the wall some of Red Eyes' things such as clothes, a saber, the ship's own flag. The most astonishing thing she found was a big black rat that talked to her. No need to say it was quite a suprise

Emiko: I sense trouble with this word...

Rach: Hey, I can't spell sucessful (sp?) or necessary (sp?) most of the
time. Surprise (sp?) is fine.

Percy: Find three things wrong with that statement, and you get a prize.

Emiko: Yet when I spell "weird" wrong you're all over me... >_<

 when the rat told her she was a senshi and gave her a kerchief with a maroon eyed Jolly Roger on it.

Emiko: Goooooo rat!

Tami: Ooh, rats.

Rach: RAT!? BLEH! BUBONIC PLAGUE (sp? XD)! RUN! RUN FOR YOUR GOD DAMN
LIVES!

Personality

Leah is a quiet person but not in that she doesn't speak. She talks when ever she just uses a quiet voice. She loves to slide in a snide comment when ever she can.

Rach: Leta won't like her for that, she hates people who act like that.

Leta: *Glare at Jace*Your a big meanie!

Tri: Wuss.

 She does have a very dark sense of humor which she uses in her own chivalrous way. She keeps popular people from picking on others.

Leta: Well excuse you!

Percy: She'll have fun with Zach.

 Not with fists but with knowledge and wit.

Tri: Better not pick on anyone, Leta, she'll kick yer ass.

Leta: *WAIL!*

 Leah doesn't like gratitude so she will never let the people she is helping know. 

Leah loves to be alone. That is why she has few friends. She would rather watch friends then have one. This does not mean she does not go to public places. Leah goes out often but by herself. She is sure of herself and is very opinionated, which most of the time leads to a closed mind.

Rach: Ooo, something about that I like.

Percy: Probably because she has a reason for being quiet. 

Despite her large size she is one of those people no one ever notices unless she taps you on the solder which lets her pick up on all kinds of little secrets.

Rach: Did I hear the two beautiful words: 'large size'?

Tri: Bring on the fatties, Felice can't be the only one!

Felice: Wanna date?

Percy: He is so stealing my line.

 For example, once one of her classmates was cheating on his girlfriend so she forged a note and stuck it in his girlfriends locker telling all about it in the boyfriend's point of view. However, she only does this to people that she feels deserve it. She would never purposely hit someone or make fun of them. Leah is a steady and easy going person who only gets mad when nice people are hurt or the old are insulted. She gets As and Bs in school but could all As if she tried even in the classes she doesn't like. Leah usually doesn't put the effort in to activities she doesn't like that she should.

Leah's love life is quite dull. Probably because she doesn't have one. Yes, she does think guys are handsome but dating is something she couldn't care less about. She has no dreams of growing up marrying a well to do man, having a family, etc. because little kids get on her nerves. She would rather live by herself and scare the little brats who live down the street.

Emiko: I don't feel a lot here. I can get it, though.

Tami: Yeah, a bit dull. I suppose she'll grow, though.

Rach: I dunno, I kinda liked it.

Percy: But then again, your a simpleton.

Tri: XD. Yeah, it could use a little work. Develop some more detail.


Appearance

If you could picture your idea of female beauty then Pri is probably the opposite of that.

Rach: *Cheers, and holds a parade*

 She looks like your everyday quarterback. She stands 5'11 and weighs 182. She has broad shoulders, well muscled arms and legs from working and squatting. Her face is not very womanly either. Leah's nose is long and straight, her eyes are deep set, and she has a strong jaw line. Her straight white hair

Emiko: Ooooh.... freaky.

Rach: I had a character that was muscular. She was cute, a little faerie.
She was also a huge idiot. Right, Blair?

Blair: O.O, eh?

Rach: She and Wade woulda liked one another, ^^.

 goes to her mid-back with no bangs. She usually puts her hair back in the kerchief that her guardian gave her. 

Leah's large eyes are red

Emiko: Does that mean she's an albino? They can't go in the sun or something...

Tami: They're probably red-red, not pink.

Rach: Oooo, freaky.

Tri: My eyes are the prettiest still, of course.

Leta: Other than mine!

Tri: Mine!

Leta: Mine!

*Both start fighting, and run off screen tearing at each others braids*

 and usually look as if they are looking through you.

Rach: She better not look through my clothes! *hides*

 She usually wears loose, comfortable earthtone clothing (rarely black) like overalls, cargo pants, tee-shirts, and warm-up pants. She usually wears natural fibers like cotton, denim, corduroy , and leather. In the shoe department Leah usually wears black leather lace-up calf-high boots or Adidas tennis shoes. Leah does not have her ears pierced and rarely wears jewelry save for a stone choker. She detests make-up and refuses to wear any much to the dislike of her mother. When she walks she does it with her head up, slowly, and quietly. 


Fuku

Leah's fuku is fairly simple but in an odd way. She has a black one piece bodysuit (looks just like a swimsuit) with a black skirt that reach mid-thigh and is rimmed with maroon. In the middle of the bodysuit is maroon bow with a skull in the center.

Emiko: I picture the bow towards the top of her stomach, right under the ribcage. ...?

Rach: Well, erm, lets see what happens as it goes on?

 Coming from the bow are two pieces of ash gray cloth. One goes over each solder

Emiko: Shoulder?

Tri: Well DUH.

Emiko: Quiet, you, or I'll make sure Trowa never ever comes to visit.

 and goes down to her lower back. The solder

Percy: Shoulder.

 guards are two small bones(like a very small femur), one on each solder. Her sleeves are black and belled with maroon trim at the bottom. The sleeves connect to the solder guards only on the inside so you can see some skin.

Emiko: I just don't get that sentence...

Rach: That makes two of us.

 Her gloves are black and go up to her wrist Her choker is just a strip of black leather. Leah's tiara is made of two rib bones fused together with the pointed ends in front holding a bloodstone.

Emiko: Cool, cool, cool.

Tri and Leta: GROSS GROSS GROSS!

Percy: I wanna eat ribs again. Mmmm, ribs. *does the Homer Simpson sound*

 Now, on to the shoes! Her shoes are black military, lace up, calf-high, leather boots.

Emiko: Any heel on 'em?

Tami: Yeah! Go for killing heels! *Grumbles heavily about the colours*

Transformation


"Azrael Archangelus Power, Make-up!" Remember the kerchief? That is Leah's henshin item. She pulls the kerchief out and holds it in front of her. She stands with her feet together, arms slightly away from her body an head down. As the space around her dims, she lets go and the black background falls away and slowly raps around Leah where the black is on her fuku. Next some of the maroon pours out of the eyes and floats to Leah. The maroon splits into four parts one going to the hem of her skirt, one to the hem of each sleeve, and one forms the front bow. The maroon around the hems swirl around the edge of the material till it soaks in making the maroon parts of the fuku. Leah brings her head up and the tiara forms on her head and the ash gray cloth connected to the bow materializes. She brings her hands to her sides in fists and a bright light shines from directly behind her.

Powers
Death Is Coming- Leah slowly crosses her arms out as she yells "Death Is Coming!" and she points at the person she has targeted as she whispers "soon". This attack basically drains energy from the person it is targeted at. The effectiveness of this attack can at its lightest make the target tired but if you tick Leah off it can cause the target to pass out momentarily. The target can still use their attacks unless they pass out. She can only use this attack twice in a fight.

Emiko: Okay, I get it.

Rach: That attack name freaks me out.

Blood Letting- She stands feet together and hands at her side and brings her arms while she yells "Blood Letting!". A light, red mist covers her opponents and then dissipates revealing that they are bleeding. Opponents usually bleed from the nose, beneath the nails, and occasionally from the mouth. This attack doesn't cause much pain but is used more to intimidate the opponent/s. The larger the group she attacks the symptoms are less severe for each person.

Emiko: That is soooo cool. XD

Jace: Damnit! How come I didn't get a neato blood attack?

Tami: Just wait until Soulmetal starts working properly.

Rach: I admit, I liked that attack from the start.

Tri: *Nose starts bleeding*Crud.

Leta: Ugh, my mouth bleeding will smudge my lipgloss!

Guardian
Her guardian is Odilo, a large black male rat. His black fur is short, glossy, and clean. Very amazing for a rat. He is missing part of his right ear but if you say any thing about it he would probably bite you. Odilo has the same sense of humor as Leah and is not afraid to use it. He is quite full of himself and likes to push other creatures around. He tends to be nagging and he can't stand it when people ignore him.

Emiko: Can I have him?

Jace: You already have a rat. His name is Tibby.

Emiko: Rats are great! They're the best! I love them! I used to be the Rat Queen, but I abdicated the thrown in favor of a democracy. I had a cabinet of rats, too... Templeton was my Chief Military Advisor and we had all sorts of great fun...

Star/Myth/Angel

Angel


Azrael is the Archangel of Death. He picked up the title when Sammael got tired of getting hit on the head by Moses so he took the leap and is the Fallen angel of darkness. Azrael is suppose to be the last to go after the earth crumbles. There are actually about 30 named angels of death in different religions but Azrael seems to be the most accepted. I picked this angel because I have been wanting to play a senshi of death for quite a time and a angel senshi so this would work out well. Plus Azrael seemed to be the main Angel of Death.

Guardian

When I thought up this character I knew a rat was the perfect guardian. First off, rats are carrion eaters that includes deceased humans. Second of all, rats are known for caring

Emiko: Carrying. I'm not so sure they care.

 diseases. In fact the Bubonic Plague

Rach: *Points frantically*SEE!? SEE!?

 (or Black Death) was taken to Europe by rats. Not to mention that like death, rats are also feared (rats even have a saint dedicated against them). I chose the saint Odilo because he is the saint of souls in purgatory. He established All Soul's Day and had a serious malady when he was young. Odilo is also often represented by a skull with cross bones.

Extra Explanation (All the other stuff I wanted to clear up)

Why does she hate dogs? Leah hates dogs because it is a common superstition that dogs bark when death is around and that they can sometimes keep death away for a short time.

If Odilo is a rat why is he clean? Leah might not be the sanest person but even she wouldn't go around a disease carrying, flea infested rat.

Emiko: Hey, I would.

Tibby: Point made.

Rach: Good good.

Why April 20th as a birthday? Some interesting people where born on this day, for instants Adolph Hitler, Napoleon, and Bram Stroker.

Emiko: Well, heck, when you explain it... KEEP THE BIRTHDAY! I COMMAND IT!

Rach: Bram Stroker? Oh that sounds wrong.

Writing Sample


Chick, chick, chick, chick, chick, ding!

"Hey Josh! Catch!" Another six pack of beer flew over the fence to land undamaged in Josh's arms as the two remaining boys climbed over the fence.

"Graveyard Halloweens are da bomb," said as Zack as he surveyed the graves around him.

"Remember what the ground's keeper said last year? I wouldn't trespass like that if I were you or something bad might happen," Jo said in a mocking tone. "What a coot! Could you get any crazier? The only thing here is dead bodies and they won't be hurting anyone. Hey, you guys see any cool graves?"

The boys searched the graveyard looking for unusual headstones, laughing, trashing the graveyard, and downing beer. A while later they found what they were looking for.

"You guuuys, take a ganderrrr at this one!" Zack and Josh ran over occasionally stumbling over each other. "Evvvviiiil will befalllll whom ever steps on this graveeee. How ooooddddd," Jo said with a drunken giggle. "Let's jump on it. One.tttwwwoooooo.umm.three!"

All three of the boys jumped on the grave and all three fell into the pit beneath which was covered by a mat of grass. They probably could have seen the mat if they were not drunk. The ground's keeper waltzed over and peeked into the pit at the three unconscious boys. She grabbed a shovel and started putting dirt back into the pit. She shook her head and grinned.

"Some people can't take a hint."

Leah took the finished story out of the typewriter and put it in the pile with the others for class. 

"Finished at last."

Emiko: Hahaha! I like the girl!

Tibby: You would.

Leta: TIIBBBYYY!! *GLOMP!*

Rach: ^_^.

Emiko: You just now notice he's here? Airhead... ~.~;

Will you allow your senshi to be killed? If not, why? I'd really rather not have her die. I like her to much and I just can't see her dying before she is old and senile.

Emiko: Heeey, cool way of putting it. All for Azzy becoming old and senile, say aye! Aye!

Tri: Nay! We should all die young! *Drinks more beer*

Tibby: F'r cryin' out loud... >_<

Emiko: Overall I liked the app but I have some trouble with the fuku. I think I can go accept with fuku revisions.

Tami: Yes! How about trying colours other than black, red, and grey, too? I mean, there are plenty of other, scarier colours! Why not just keep the grey? Anyway, accept revis ^_^

Rach: What they said. Accept with Revisions!