Red pen, red pen! *brandishes it* Here we go again!

Incineration, huh? Ouchies, that smarts... So does that name. 
*grins* Poor guy... Okay, I think we need some more on his family. 
Even if they don't really appear much, it'd be a good idea to know 
how he interacts with them. Does he get along with them or hate 
them? And the same with his friends. Or maybe relocate them to 
history where I think they would fit much better?

Interesting arrangement of likes, dislikes, etc. 

Julius: Veal is baby cow. *evil grin* Yum.

Evil, nasty pig! *pushes him out* History... Good, covers all the 
basics. You could always add more details but it's pretty solid, as 
is. Which makes me happy. See? *grins* Though the phrase "libido-
driven surfer" makes me think far too much of our boy Zach.

And the personality... Is rather too close to Zach as well. Just a 
nastier, more shallow Zach... Could we have some more please? He 
just sounds like a jerk who happens to save people from drowning.

Appearance leaves me wanting somehow. I just can't quite see him. 
Unless he looks like your basic, generic suntan lotion model?

Ack! He stole his fuku from an eighties pop band's lead singer! 
Yay! *cheers* It's so tacky, I love it. Sandals and socks! ^_^ 
And the transformation's good, too. All flashy and flamey. Okay, 
powers. I really like Burning Fornazication and it's not just 
because the name amuses me. It's a good one. Glavanized Casquerade 
confuses me, though. What does it have to do with incineration 
again? Torrid Ocular also puzzles me. I agree that it is rather 
similiar to a certain mutant's power (who shall remain nameless, the 
anal-retentive git) and, while the outcome is pretty relative, the 
execution is iffy... The Hansel and Gretel thing cracks me up, 
though, and so I'm very very tempted to say "Oh, go on and have it!"

Okay, my official opinion is Reject for Revisions. It's just way to 
close to Zach/Hyperion in some cases that it makes me nervous. Plus 
I'd love some more detail here and there... And the powers are iffy 
in my mind, too. However, I quite like the fuku and some of the 
really fun touches you put here and there. Please, please try again.

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SkySong:

Ok now! ^_^ Time for a review! ^_^ *Cracks knuckles and whips out the might blue pen.* An astronomia Eh? Been a while since we got one of them, be prepared for much frustration from them, aside from Tibby they aren’t a very active group. Ok, the name is odd, I suggest a change. The meaning is all fine and dandy- 
Regina: What kind of word is “Dandy”? 

Ahem! But how it’s gonna sound will draw him some weird looks. Age is good. Most of our people are 20 or under, except for Rayya. ^_^ The astro sign is good too. ^_^ It’s to be assumed that the family has the same last name unless 1) the mother kept her maiden name or 2) other relative are mentioned. A little more detail on the folks eh? A bit on their personalities would be nice. Same for his friends. 
Likes and dislikes are all in order. Aspirations interesting. 

Eric: I’d advise against being a cop. 

That’s just because your father was one and he died. Now continuing… He was born on Virginia beach but his parents lived in Roanoke? Why? Were they visiting relatives? Shopping? The hospital was there? I’d assume there’d be a hospital in Roanoke… 

Eric: She’s in a nit-picky mood today. -_- 

He was nick-named “Blaze” because he was blonde and green eyed? I don’t see the connection. It’d make more sense for a red-head. 
On the personality and appearance part, I agree with Angie that it reminds mea bit too much of old Zack/Hyperion Knight for it to be passable. 
*L* “Big yellow pencil” ^_^ The transformation is fine. 
As for the powers… ^_^ Quote “Senshi with metal legs”, I’m assuming that’s a reference to Jace? ^_^ 
As for "Galvanized Casquerade!" how much does it protect him? Does it half the power of the attack or nullify it completely? And why does this work on lightning too? And how could it’s power be nullified? By knocking the helmet off? 
"Torrid Ocular!" is weird… I had to re-read it several times to understand it. 
"Birds Eat Breadcrumbs! Hansel and Gretel’s Revenge!" amusing tittle but I say ditch it for later… like when he’s a super or eternal senshi. 
The info on the Galaxy is well done. ^_^ Very well done. And you’re panning for him to commit suicide? I’m considering that option for Gina… 

Regina: *Glare* 

Err… yea. ^_^.. There were problems with a lot of things but mostly where I’m concerned it’s in the Personality, History, and Powers. I don’t mind his appearance much, but his personality resemblance to Zack needs to be changed. More detail in the history and Powers please. So REJECT FOR REVISION