Emiko: Lalalalala, nice name, nice age, nice to know he has a family. XD Jeremy, Jeremy, Jeremy! Another Gabriel app came in a few hours before this one, and that character's middle name was Jeremy, too. ^^ And my choice for Granny's attempt to call Ertael somethign besides Ertael was Jeremy, but then Jeremy (aka Cassiopeia) came in, so I changed it to Jonathan. Fwah, Jeremy is a cool name, though. Jeremy Bulloch played Boba Fett in ESB and ROTJ! Talos: A-hem. Oh, yes, on with the review, of course... Parent info is good, but what do they look at? Im' just curious. He likes Ren stuff, is he in SCA? Ha, funny story, this. Today I was playing chess in the park (second toughest to beat! Out of three people, one of whom actually did beat the master... XD) Anyway, one of the guys was named Ee-yan, but the old guy called him Eye-an! Hahaha! Talos: KEEP ON TRACK! Yeesh, slave driver. Man, sushi pops up so much... people either list is as favorite or least favorite. Me, my favorite food is... ....... sushi. Dagnabbit! XD Nice subject interests. Very believable, and the way you've embellished that is great. Good hobby works, too. Wow, history is incredibly thorough without being bogged down in details, very well-connected to his personality, compeltely believable. A model history. Big ouch on the whole high school sophomore charade. :( If I see Leonard around town, I'll pummel him with my broadsword! Talos: ... You don't even have a broadsword. Well, it's the thought that counts. Talos: ... I'm going downstairs to eat. DON'T EAT MY CHEEEEESE!!! Talos: I wasn't going to! *leaves* You can never trust people around cheese. Ah, behold the power of cheeeeeese..... Honestly, this is a spectacular history. Kudos. *applauds* Let's see if the rest of the app is as good, eh? ;D (Oh no, you set a high standard for yourself!) Hmm, I like personality. No complaints here. Switching eyes! Freaky. But I knew a girl whose eyes would change from green to blue and back again. If eyes are windows to the soul, what does that mean? I wish I knew who Bruce Campbell was... Please don't hit me! XD Overall, thorough personality, and I really get a sense for Ian's overall appearance. I want to see him SMyth Monthly Hunk thing now in a suit and tie... So how long is this over-toga thing? And you meant the scabbard hangs off the belt, I think. (I almost typed sword myself there, so you're forgiven.) Yes, you could call them bracers. Good idea relating the style and size to something most people in the rpg will be able to recognize. :) I've only seen an episode or two or Star myself, though... Oooh! References! Cool transformation. Neat-o powers. Trumpet of Vengeance is mean! Gwah! Scary! With sweep of his sword, does that just mean every sweep through the air? Waaahh, I don't wanna fight him! XD Talos: *returns with sandwich in hand* She has a fear of water in her lungs. *shrugs and takes a bite of sandwich* I do not! I have a fear of being unable to get water out of my lungs, that's different... I guess because I've never really had water in my lungs. ^^; Anyway! Neato powers. I wish he were in Rome, though. I don't know why. I just want to see him fight Poseidon. XD Weasel! Yay! Myth info is nice... I wonder what Clare will do when she finds out Francis has been killed by Ertael? Talos: If you ever finish typing up Tubiel's info. I will! I'm almost done! Talos: I'll believe it when I see it. :P Anyway, I like how you've used various aspects of Gabriel without going too far from his assigned element... That was my main problem with the other Gabriel app. El Greco! Heehee! We have a guardian named El Greco! I really like your writing sample, meh. I'm going accept, and please tweak the little fuku details. ----- Woodknot: >Senshi: Gabriel Knight, Archangelus Senshi of Water; Yeah! The angelus need a Gabriel 'cause he is like the coolest angel EVER. Leah: What about me? What about you? There are tons of angels that are angels of death but there is only one Gabriel. Good name especially for that type of family. I had a friend named Ian Michael, weird. Leah: 21, this guys a legal drinker. Look! He has a family too. Nice family descriptions and history. He is a French Major! Sensas! Je suis tombee et je me suis casse la tete! Leah: Ugh. He has dogs. Shush. Good reasoning behind the likes and dislikes. Colors are gold and scarlet? Nice colors but we aren't accepting any more reds are we? Lacrosse, boy is varity good. It's great he is not a super star swimmer too. Wonderfully detailed history and yet it is still intresting! I love the eye thing. I had a friend who's eyes changed color but most of the time they were green and red. Hahah! Hairy chest! Wow, there are a lot of colors in his fuku. Green/blue, scarlet, gold, silver, and what color are lilies? White? Cool powers. A weasel! Another rodent creature! Since Clare can mean clear his guardian's name goes with his power too. This is also a well written story. I can tell he put a lot of time and effort into this app. It is very well done and I think we should Accept with revisions to may be the color? ----- Tami: YEAAAAH! Gabriel! *does a funk dance* An important Angelus dude. Wade. Review this with me. Wade: *salutes* Here, y'know? Like said before, we HAVE gotten a scary amount of Jeremies lately pertaining to Gabriel. The only really cool Jeremy is Germy the Cassiopeia Kamen, anyway. Wade: ^^;; I like his name. S'nice n'normal. Ooh, look. He's Cancer, just like you. Wade: ^___^ Nice family info; just enough for it to be really neatly detailed without giving us too much. Fits in with the history and how Ian is now. Would've been nice to give us how Ian likes his parents, though. Wait. You do in history. Silly me. Wade: This is a rockin' history. Ian's your average nice guy, y'know? Religious background, childhood incidents, people who helped shape his life. Jace: Into a steel pretzel. Did I say you could review? No. I did not. Jace: He plays LACROSSE. Wade: Nothin' wrong with lacrosse... the drug thing is really sad. ;_; I like the history. Personality's sweet, too. Ian is so normal it's driving me crazy. Very believable. Shy faith-filled sweetheart who's also your normal joshin' male. This all will change, of course. I -love- breaking the normal, happy ones. Wade: oO I bet you he's gay and will enter in an angsty relationship with Rick. Wade: TAMI! *beams* Am I embarrassing you guys? Jace: Are you -breathing-? I like his appearance. The eye thing is cool. I know there's a name for that disease, just can't remember it. I'll call it Yuna Syndrome. He's hot in a low-key way. He's so blastedly NORMAL. Perfectly adjusted, perfectly normal, perfectly perfect... *cackles* That fuku is going to be heavy, ornate, and embarrassing to wear. I love it. It's more gold than red, so that's okay. I love the sword. It should be flaming. FLAMING SWORD OF VENGEANCE! Is that cross perhaps... A CROSS-SWORD? *Dresses up like Seifer and refuses to not for the rest of the app* Jace, Wade: *pack their things and move to Angie's* You guys can't do that. Angie and I share a headspace. So you're already living with her. Jace: Damn it. Torrent of Lilies? Completely cool. Baptism of Tears? I like it. Trumpet of Vengeance? *screams for at least five hours* Divine Annunciation? *screams until whacked in the head* I like? Clare is a sweetheart and reminds me inexplicably of Kiki from Sluggy Freelance. Explanation's fine, writing sample rocks - some technical flaws, but they're typos anybody could make - and, frankly, I LOVE Ian. It's about time we got some damn powerhouses. Wade: I like 'im. ^_____^ ACCEPT!