ÿþEmiko:



Right off the bat (no pun intended), cooooool. She's Vietnamese! 

Ahem, moving along.



Favorite food is nice and specific, and it's something we don't see 

much of in the foods area. Plenty of descriptive likes and dislikes. 

I can already get a sense for what kind of person she must be.



Hmm, we're staring with appearance, eh? I can do that. And what an 

appearance it is! Concise and descriptive. I have a Vietnamese friend 

I think must look just like her, which is scary.



What is prowling cars? I'd look it up, but I'm in the middle of 

writing this review and I dont' want to stop reading right now. Maybe 

later. ^^ I understand her brother, though I'm not sure I know what 

he looks like beyond how tall he is. No big deal, he's just NPC.



You know what's really scary? The story of her parent's restaurant 

sounds exactly like the Thai cuisine place downtown. It started in 

the Market's food court and expanded to a restaurant.



Perrrsonality! She's got a lot. I like the similes. They're fun. ^^



Solid history. Great transformation. And powers? She can flash 

people! Boo-YAH! I feel sorry for her not having any magic attacks, 

though. I hope she'll get some later.



The idea of a half-nude Vietnamese (you've finally done something I 

myself should have long ago) girl running around the rpg is pure mad 

genius. I want it. Accept.



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Colin:



Go Team Cultural Diversity!



Another young Roanoake senshi... 



Oh! You messed up the order, which is fairly ironic for such an 

organized character, but I think I prefer the appearance to come 

before personality and history, anyway. I like how she looks; it 

kind of fits the whole 'moving from one point to another/whom do you 

feel like today?' flippant-motif. 



I think we all know a girl like Ai.



Northside High? I'm not familiar with that school.



That fuku is awesome! Nicely researched on the powers, too.



It's shrot, but really well done!



Accept.



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Morgan:



VIETNAMESE! *falls to knee and worships*



I'm going to keep this short since I'm low on time, so off we go.



Basic stats check out well. I used to be afraid of dogs, too, in fact 

part of me still is, but... okay;



She almosts sounds like a DU with her order fetish. Oh ho ho.



Where is the family? FAMILY?! Ah-ha-ha! After appearance. Well, this 

setup of the application is giving me a minor heart palpatition. I 

thought you had forgotten and then I would've cried because I adore 

(simply put) Ai.





4'10. Geezus.



Well. I have no bitch about the brother. I think that is a first. 

You've described and created a real character, one who could be my 

brother.



I would enjoy some personality on mother and father; even if it is 

just point a (nice) point b (bitchy), etc, etc. If they are going to 

play a part in her story, detail would be nice. Mmgkay?



I know that irks me, too. Stupid not scientific people. GAH! 

Personality-wise, I love her. She, again, is a real girl. I think I 

have a friend who is identical to her. You've done a very nice job 

creating a character who could be sitting next to you in Calculus 

class with her appearance, family, and personality. 



Jesus. I love this application.



Chom sao --> passes my inspection. 



Hedu> ASTROPHYSICS! *worships*



Redshift --> good reasoning behind this attack. Checks out.



She's very defensive, eh?



Ohhhh god. ACCEPT. ACCEPT. I think I am in love. This app rocked my 

socks and I can't wait to have Ai in the story. The only question I 

have is if they are upper middle class, why do they live in a duplex? 

eh? Full accept, though, maybe with some minor revisions on mum and 

dad :D