Lori: Well, I love the writing in this application. It's descriptive without being overly flowery, and Kilierra is well fleshed out. However, I'd like to ask if Kilierra ever becomes bratty or anything? Her personality is a bit too perfect, but that can easily be remedied. I say Accept with Revisions, and I want one of my girls to go up against this kid and get the pooty whooped out of 'em! ----- G: Well, I think Kilierra is awesome! Personality, history, powers ... all top notch. The only thing I can think of is maybe nixing the wings off her fuku. I don't if Em wants wings until Eternal level. Then again, I could be (and frequently am when it comes to stuff like this) wrong. I vote accept all the way. ----- Emiko: Okay, lessee, we're already familiar with family, of course... Very interesting to see Eraen as a blurb this time. ^^ Your likes and dislikes are incredibly done. Wow. We have another application with a young kid who reads philosophy texts; yours was first, but still, it's an overused cliche. Background works for a ten-year-old. Personality brings me to the point of the cliche again. Kids with wisdom beyond their years. I got away with it because Talos isn't really a kid, he's just currently trapped in that body. Um, wait, currently he's still a partridge. ... I've confused myself. Anyway, everyone wants to make little kids with this immense wisdom. Why can't we have more little kids who really are little kids? I'll let you get away with it mainly because yours is so well-written, and you've got a more natural child-attitude in there as well, and you're the first one to do this here. Fuku checks out to me. I wanna try and draw it. On to powers. What size area does Death Sigil effect? Five missiles appear, but how far do they travel to hit people? And what's the size of the area where a person steps that will trigger the mine? How long does a mine stay there? (Will it disappear after a while?) Does it only trigger when senshi steps on it or anyone? Guardians? Do the missiles only hit senshi, or normal people as well? What exactly is the effect on the people who are hit by it? Knocked down? Do burns or bruises or something appear on their body? Does it make them go numb? On "Til Death," can she then make the voices stop? I ask because you said after five minutes she might be knocked unconscious... so it'd be useful for her to be able to stop this, else if a battle runs longer than five minutes... And how are you defining "end of battle?" Well, all in all, tough call here. I dislike the cliche of children wise beyond their years. I mean I really dislike it, even if yours is well-written and not the standard cardboard cutout of this cliche. I'm going to say Accept with Revisions. How much you revise is up to you.