Emiko:

Okay, that's odd. I just got through telling a Mercury applicant she'd be better off using ice for Pluto, and here Meiling has a Pluto app with ice. XD I look forward to seeing how this goes.

Go crossover stories! But why is this one an Astronomia Senshi when Hope is a Graikos? Maybe you should consider making her a Divinitas Graikos instead. Just a thought.

Ha, I like the ice skate irony.

How does she manage to get any schoolwork graded with such small handwriting? That's a big problem.

Nice to have a sports person here.

Why would the neighborhood be known as rich if it's not that much above average? Actually, wait, I'll give that one to you. My neighborhood is known as semi-rich, and the fact of the matter is, we're all distinctly middle class. Most of the rich people just hide themselves well. (Or live in Hunting Hills, an area of Roanoke that's really known as rich.)

I'll also give you first grade reading level at sixth grade. I read full-length fantasy novels (adult level) in second or third grade. I alos learned to read very young and, dear gods, reading books in school was a disaster!

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The worst thing about knowing how to read when everyone else was learning was listening to my sorry classmates trying to read. They were soooo slow in comparison; it drove me up the wall. And in third grade, when everyone started juvenile fiction (heh, I was in the advanced program at my school) we used to have to read pages aloud in class, and it was even MORE excruciating! I would read ahead fifteen or twenty pages while my classmates struggled over the page they were trying to read aloud, and then when my turn came I'd have to ask what page they we're on and flip back. I snuck outside books in to read, too...

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You actually do find more athletic girls in middle school, so my only gripe is that Wendy is termed as being in the mostly-male atheltic group. Revise that a bit. Instead, say she rejects the traditional female sports groups, as they are much too preppy for her tastes. That makes sense. (And for the record, the preppiest female sport in middle school/high school, besides cheerleading [that's not a sport!!!] is volleyball.)

Oh dear gods, I hope she doesn't get added to the Astronomia casualties. I really like her so far!

Wow, cool personality. No complaints. ^^ I love her appearance details as well.

This is the least revealing senshi outfit ever! One million Emiko points! (redeemable for crappy merchandise any where Emikos are sold)

Interesting weapon...

I don't quite understand Arctic Assault, and it doesn't sould very useful. Replace it with something else. Like an attack that covers the area in ice! XDDDD *realyl wants to see everyone slipping and spraining ankles*

Finally, a hyper guardian! I like the guardian. Rabbit makes sense for ice. She and Aeneas should get together. XDD

I'll go Accept with Revisions. Just do something else with her second attack and I won't complain too much about her being Astronomia when she's already got a Graikos in the family. (Cousins, not siblings, but still.) I will put a moratorium on those kinds of unrealistic genetic relationships, though.

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Legend:

hm...jock or jock? *muses* I think I'll take the funny jock, rather than the arrogant one. HEATH!

Heath: Yes'm?

Come review this application with me!

Heath: Er...can't, off to the pool for Surfing.

*siiiiigh* ah well, let's get reviewing. Isn't there some new thing about the Senshi having to be in the same group if they're family?...but since they're cousins, and at least Astronomia and Graikos aren't sworn enemies like Romanus and Graikos or something, I suppose it's all right ^_^

..I'll be one of those Italy/America crossover stories when Abby goes back to Rome for a bit.

Anyways, it's pretty much good, except for the power changes like Em mentioned and such. ^_^ sorry, am feeling lazy. Verdict: Accept with Revisions.