Emiko: Yay, Rigel's back! His power sphere is too cool, really. So let's see what's up! Nice family detail. What's his dad do, though? Granny is grat! Chain- smoker with unpleasant smell! Go Grannies! (My char Abernathy has a Granny too, only his sits on the porch with a shotgun.) Ha! I love his likes! His dislikes are cool, too. Mmm, sushi! I like octopus. ^^ You can get a piece of octopus nigiri with the suckers still on i and then stick the suckers on your plate! It's fun! Try it! Talos: Surgeon Generals Warning - listening to Emiko may be harmful to your health. Nyaaaah! :P Anyway, niuce little aspration and reasoning there. Great history, seriously. Well thought out. Useless capitalist propaganda! LOL! Gwah, starting off your personality with an astrological sign: ickypoo. Irgle, there's something about personality I don't like, maybe it's just how this whole quiet contemplative bit doesn't match with his history. Sure, you say's he's got a rebellious side, too, but I just think those two sides are a little too contradictory. Which side of his personality are you going to play, after all? By doing this, you're giving yourself the ability to play him as two different people. I like appearance I suppose, especially the wearing of things he picks up. What's a Chinese-style coat? What shape mask? How high are his boots? Can we get some illustrative pictures here? I like transformation. Since Atri's not here (He and my entire security detail have been taken by Lady Admiral Piett in her bid for galactic power! She took my security detail and most of my whanau! XD;;) I'll refrain from our normal Thundercats impression. Urge to shout rising-- rising! XD I love the powers, you know that. No complaints here, only praise for such great power base and use of the aspecs of the power base. I'll go accept with revisions. Can you maybe mesh the personality more, maybe make it so his rebelliousness is an outer covering or compensation for something, versus a kind of split personality? And give us a picture of his fuku. Emiko signing out! ----- Sky: Rian: Yay, an Astra! Very thorough on the family, nice and realistic. Chain-smoking grandmas are the best! ^^;; Pay no attention to her. I don't think we've had a high school dropout before, have we? Very realistic app (or as realistic as we can get, describing people with powers). Likes and dislikes are out of the ordinary. The history just kicks ass and needs no comment from me, except...how'd he get the nickname 'Stick'? I know someone who makes a living snagging things from garage sales and selling them on Ebay...you can actually do pretty well that way. I think I know what you mean by Chinese style coat - I've been watching too many movies lately - but it would be better to have a pic. Very cool transformation (masculine sparkles: XD). Yeah, WHACK THEM WITH THE STICK! XD I'm loving the powers, too. Well done. Great power base, great powers, terrific char. I'm right on the fence btw accept and accept with revisions for the needing-a-pic thing. ::sigh:: So long as you promise to send a pic and explain the Stick thing, I say ACCEPT. ----- Jen: Time to flex my reviewing muscles. *Stretches and winces* Ooh, so stiff. I guess that's what happens when you don't review in ages. The family sounds well explained, although I must admit I really don't see why a forty-two year old man would be the second or third most popular guy on the highschool football team. Maybe I missed something. *Rereads the section* Eh... still don't get get it. ^^; The statistics are good, very interesting likes and dislikes. And I must say it's nice to see not all of the senshi go to schoo And I must assume that Archie's hometown was in Roanoke, hmm? Or not? *scratches her head in more confusion* Alright, just where was Troy raised? But other then that little detail I love the history; it's got enough angst but not enough to make it like a plotline out of one of his mom's soap-operas. His personality does make some sense in my opinion, having known the ugly side of depression. A roller-coaster ride from being quiet and moody and then peaking briefly as being outgoing, if only to fool the people around them to keep them from knowing just how down and out you are. And, for further nitpicking, what kind of skin does he have aside from medium-toned? Warm or cool undertones? Just to give an idea of colouring ya know... No qualms with the fuku but the henshin item could be more detailed. How long is it? What colour? Embossed or plain? Neat henshin, as are the powers. *Wishes she remembers more of the thundercats from younger days* Anyways, aside from very minor details this was a great app. So if you could fix up the little details (detail of the stick and just where Troy was born and raised) I will vote for this to be an Accept, But.