Lori: ADVERTISEMENT I'm holding to my review of last time. Haydn is adorable, and I can't wait to write with Morgan. ^_^ ACCEPT ----- Tami: I have absolutely zilcho qualms with this app except for the last name. (Cyningeslelelelahzibbetflah. That poor guy.) All the pertinent points that needed fixing were made clearer, and frankly, I think he'd be a good addition, no matter how silly the hat is. Nice sprucing-up on the attacks. Gawsh, you have lovely description. The Astronomia have a habit of dying like flies anyway and I think he'll strengthen their ranks nicely. It was borderline the last time anyway! I vote Accept! ----- Emiko: Yay! Mr. Unpronounceable Name is back! He's already been paired with someone? Have you been plotting with Tami? I'm scared to think what... XD So his birthday isn't in December, it's just bloody close to it, eh? Ho well. Is this one of those "sign must match with personality things?" I hate those. It's illogical, you know? How can a bunch of shapes people imagined in the stars have any true meaning and influence on our personalities? The descriptions always seem to be vague enough to allow people under a sign to identify... but enogu of this rant. Let's move on. Great detail on family, but 5'3" for a thirteen-year-old is NOT short. Average height for a male of thirteen years is 5'1", therefore Rhys is actually currently tall for his age. And he hasn't even hit his growth spurt yet, has he? 'S not so much the best colors as much as it is fuku colors... Thanks for the Oliver reference. Describes most of the well-written but terrible and thusly rejected apps we get! No, they don't separate dorm rooms by country really, unless you're a first year, in which case it's often done that way so you've got something in common with your flatmate. Then, of course, unless the relationship goes really sour, the two often end up just sticking with their current dorm room arrangement... Um, aside done. His phrase is right, though I always find it iffy when characters begin their transformation before they've actually finished their phrase. Seems like cheating to me in some way. Tearing up floor must be interesting for when he tries to do Devilsnare indoors... Cricket. Cricket, Cricket, Cricket. Well, it looks absolutely fabulous to me. ^^ I think Haydn's great and interesting and funny and the Astronomia needs people. But please decide what to do with the minor things, like Rhys's height. I'll call it an Accept with Revisions.