Jenny~Pie: Aww, right off the bat, first thing you see, is that this thing is LOOOOONG. Damn. Gwyn: Not your problem. Anarchist. I, who has a b-rain, like long apps. Smartass. Gwyn: First off, I think the way the app is set up is cool, favoratism! Fatass too! Gwyn: *slams a frying pan on player* Its interesting anyway. Lo-Cal... Roanoke! Love then name, but what does Basque mean? *feels dumb* Good meaning, and nickname. Too bad she's an astronomia. DOOM. Gwyn: Ah well. I'll bother reading on anyway. Great family history. Jen always slacks there... *from kitchen* Does vinegar count? Gwyn: No! *still hollerin'* But its from Ireland!!! Gwyn: Still, no. *Jen drinks it anyway* Gwyn:*fizzles* Hey, peircings in akward places???? *drool* *hiccup* She's Freaky Frankie! Elch, and a trekkie. Gwyn: You just don't -understand- her. Neither do you, we're no where near the personality section yet. Gwyn: She's apathetic, Jen. Relate. Slut. Gwyn: She's cool. She's -so- cool. And she smokes, what does that tell ya??? *shrug* Gwyn: I wanna smoke again. Damn. *fiends* But she can't be a real smoker if she doesn't have a brand. *looks around for sharp, shiny things to get Frankie's "attention"* Wow. All that stuff was just the "likes"? Gwyn: *reads dislikes* Did I ever mention that I live, eat, and breathe Star Trek? *raises an eyebrow* No. Gwyn: Well I do now! And I argue like a bitch! *wink* When did this review go horribly wrong? Gwyn: Rednecks? Hey, I'm from New York, everyone's a damn redneck to me! *moment of silence for Sept. 11th anniversary* *no seriously* Gwyn: Dislikes were great. Though we will not be trying any damn liverwurst sammich anytime soon. *Jen shakes head vigorously* Gwyn: Hobbies and aspirations, coo'.... Hey, my best friend in MS got a tatoo the same way. Go lighters and Needles!!! So what if its seepy lookin'? Gwyn: This is some good history. Very Capricornish persona... *gush* Why are you gushing??? Gwyn: She's so mean and sexy! Like Jace? Gwyn: *puke* Okay, not like Jace... Gwyn: *struggles not to call her take-chargeness kinky* .... Sassy. Wow, the Astronomia really, really needed a character like this to take charge. *ponders* Maybe she won't die? Nah. Gwyn: *shrug* And is that the first hint of an accent??? Pinkish hair! *gush* My God. Run for the sake of your simple little mind, reader! GO! Gwyn: I wouldn't joke about that queen of the Universe stuff, Dani. *watches the skies fearfully* Look at all these goddamn details! *faints with joy* *sigh* Sooo. So. Not drunk right now. Gwyn: Hmm, so the fuku is web looking magenta and teal or whatever? Okay... *reads weapon description* I don't like the sound of this mangler thingie... Ha! Gwyn: I don't understand how they work, exactly, but I think the powers rule! Go original concepts! Bling! Bling! *rolls eyes* Good explinations though. I must say. Gwyn: Hey, her color means she's scientific? What does my color mean? Well, I've always thought of you as a green too... *tries to remember colors on app* But it doesn't mean your scientific... someone told me my aura's neon green... *mumble, mumble* Gwyn: *odd look* And that's why we don't drink vinegar kids! Kelly green pillow! That's what you are! Kelly Green! *joys* Gwyn: GO TO SLEEP! *Jen snores* Gwyn: All I can tell from this writing sample, is that: A)Good writer! B) Frankie -needs- to get laid before her head explodes! You're so smart Gwyn... *growl* Gwyn: Well, I have -no- qualms with this app. Though the character is a bit Jace-ish, Jace is turning into more of a wussie by the day, and I plan to kill her soon anyway- GWYN! Gwyn: Anyway, I say ACCEPT! And may the Astronomia curse carry on its due course. ----- Legend: *bounces up and down hysterically for about an hour* She's a TREKKIE! I thought I was the ONLY ONE! *beams* I love her. I hate her name, but that's a personal opinion. I feel bad for her. *smiles* but she can keep it! Abby: I hate my name too. Parents suck sometimes, don't they? Well, at least she's only got -three-. I had fun with your names, Abby! *beams* Anyways, you've passed on the family inspection, which is always my big thing, for whatever reason. Yuli's funny, and Yana reminds me horribly of what Abby's probably going to turn out like when she's that age. Abby: I am -not- a bubble head! I'm just not book smart! Hmph! Stupid learning. And -I- think Star Trek is dumb. That's only because you don't take the time out of your sports-oriented life to watch it. Star Trek Rules! *beams* And I put Trill spots on all the time, it's really funny to watch the reactions of the kids at school, although once we had an administrator think it was a gang symbol. *snickers* And I quote Star Trek too... Okay, I'll make this short because I have a tendency to ramble....She's an evil depressed Trekkie! *beams* I love her. I want her. Abby, marry her. Abby: I don't quite swing that way, Legend...actually, I really don't swing -any- way. I know, you're a stick in the mud. *sulks* But you'll go rock-climbing and stuff with her, right? Right? Abby: She's Astronomia, so I'll have to say no. Unless she wants me to push her -off- the rocks and cut the bungee cord. You're no fun at all! *cries* All right, there's really nothing I can find wrong with the app, and I'm going to stop chattering now since Abby refuses to sleep with her. She thinks sex is evil anyway. *sighs* Final Verdict: Accept! But only if you make her give me all her Star Trek TNG and DS9 videos...oh, and Enterprise if she has any of those. ----- dL: Starfleet.... ooooooh dear. Triangulum, Senshi of Geometry! I -so- entirely fit those together when I first looked at the name, too! Ask around! I'll call her Frankie the Great Basher! Rhia: Idiot. Franz? Rhia: ... She's Basque-enese French Arabian! Star Trek is evil and should NOT be worshipped accordingly. Though, my feelings toward all Trekkies aren't the same, so this won't hinder you... much. Then again... if she embodies a trekkie to the umpteenth degree, you're dead and friendless... *grins* Twenty-two... dear lord. You are one of those brain-stealers, too, aren't you? I have/had a Galaxia app with mechanics and similar fun-ness! Yay! No tattoos though, but that's not a bad idea if another Galaxia position opens (muy unlikely). Maybe we could get them working at the same place! SHE LIKES "pointy things"! Okay, that's it. You're joining the club in my brain and that's that! No refusals, all access fun fun fun! A SMOKER! YAY! We need a senshi of Geometry that smokes, don't we Joshua??? Joshua: SMOKER'S CLUB! w00t! Again with the sharp things! YAY! Rhia: Be my friend? Star Trek again! DIE EVIL FIEND! I love infomercials. *dies of horror* PSYCHICS! DIE FRANKIE! DIE! So... Frankie doesn't like "blunt things"... well, I bet Haydn could remedy her not liking blunts, at least. Myra: Horrible! Drugs are bad! *covers her ears* La! La! LA! Rhia: I have to agree with not liking Americans, though. Then again, I like Americans incredibly moreso than British people. The damned British people frighten me with their peculiar accent. Myra: You're Italian. Rhia: Yeah, so? You're from India. Myra: Freakmonger! Rhia: *gasp!* Myra: XD Alright then. AGAIN WITH STAR TREK! AGH! Eww... that sandwich is gross. Myra: JOIN NASA WITH ME! Oh yeah, that was in your aspirations, too, wasn't it? Myra: YEP! NASA IS MUY FUN! Do we all say "muy" now? Or are you mocking me? *dead silence* *looks around* Must be Rose. Rose: *evil glares, leaves* Well then. Very, very nice history. Personality makes me confused, but I understand it. Me and wording just don't mix sometimes. But, overall, very nice, indeed! I'm going to kill her, though. Damn trekkie. NO! NOT GYPSY! AGH! KIBA! GET OUT HERE! Kiba: Jes? Jou keep zjelling at mich like zat und I am goink tu go var var ay-vay vrom jou unt neber kom bach. What the Hell? Kiba: Zjipsy pipul are zo goink tu kom slay jou som day ch. Ch? What are you "ch"-ing me, Gypsy woman!? Kiba: *goes "ay-vay"* What a weirdo. Oh dear lord, she doesn't shave her legs!? Auto-reject! AGH! TRIANGLE FACE! AGH! I suggested a protractor for whoever got Triangulum, but a square- edge works fine, too! But protractors are so much funnier... hehehe. I don't like the Angled Mangler, but that's only because it's not geometry-like... I say use a compass and stab people. "Triangulum Triangulation Termination!" makes no sense to me, but I suppose that's because you can do more than one thing with it. Aside from me not getting the whole step-hand-ground-touching-to-form-a-net thing... It's just... odd and complex. And the second part doesn't get any better for me, either. Forty-five seconds is a long time. It really is, when just delivering an attack. Wait a sec, you said there were two forms, but I'm reading three apparent ones. I'm so utterly perplexed. I feel sorry for Frankie, especially if she has to use it correctly, and I can't even figure out how to use it incorrectly! XD ^^;;; I'm seeing three attacks under one name and that's just confusing me majorly... Eep. Oh, and, can't see the artwork. Use actual urls.. when you send links to Em, they don't get forwarded onto the list. Eep! Again ^^ And, you are right, the Galaxia are the most powerful group in the LU, aside from the Universalis herself. I think we need a weak one eventually. They've all got big heads! ^^ Your explanations are great, but I just got too majorly confused and didn't want to be a pushover when I read this. I really do like this app a lot, but many people get confused, and I suppose I'm representing, eh? I love the Lovejoys... to a degree, and am very happy you made an Astronomia instead a darned Angelus! ^^; But... due to the Power you have... I am going to horridly suggest a reject/revise. Joshua: What are you... evil??? Yes. Joshua: No, I'm serious. You find one thing wrong and you want to r/r the girl! Well... powers are a major thing and I'm incredibly confused. Joshua: So? You won't be fighting her. What's the matter? You know the only thing stopping her from getting an Accept/Revise is the fact that you have always wanted the Galaxia position for yourself since your first attempt fell through. And the fact that you wanted your new one to be me doesn't help my case either. Look what you've done. You are mean!!! *cries* Joshua: You deserve it! You deserve every minute of it. It's not her fault we're mechanics with A- bloodtypes! Go on! I give up! Alright, you brazen woman! Final Verdict: Accept with Revisions to Power. Joshua: I'm so proud of you. *tender moment... dies* WWWWHHHHYYYY!!!!???? *cries* Rhia: Oh, come on ya big sissy! *kills Rhia* Myra: Uh-oh. *runs* ----- Emiko: Okay, right off the bat, I have to say it-- I /love/ the Star Trek angle of this app. Her name is Bashir. BASHIR! And she's the senshi of GEOMETRY, which just proves the Astronomia have some of the nerdiest power bases ever. (Physics, anyone?) She's 22, that's good. Her parents are really nicely detailed. Hollin rocks! And I'm sure she'd find some fellow rock climbers at Hollins. Her likes and dislikes are great, with tons of detail there, too... And STAR TREK!! *beams* Frankie's a nut. And we wouldn't have it any other way. Though you won't see me eating her favorite sandwiches any time soon. I do have a slight concern, but it's more a curiosity. Hollins is well-known for its English department. How is it in science? I just don't know myself. ^^;; History! *snickers* Yet more well-thought-out detail and interesting shtuff. Personality! Details, details, details! If the Astronomia don't provide enough copensation for Frankie, will she join the DU? She'd probably like those aliens. Appearance! ... Shucks, what can I say? You've just put a whole lot of detail and work into every aspect of this application! I can't make comments because there aren't any holes or problems and everything is equally great! *sobs* The Angled Mangler! XD Triangulum Triangulation Termination! What great names. XD TTT is a little confusing,but I think I understand how it works. Cool. Mm, isn't Bashir perfect? Heeheehee... All of your explanation is wonderful. I'm envious. But... am I missing something?? I don't know why, but... I don't see her fuku. I'm confused. Very confused. Very, very confused. I keep looking, and I see something in her henshin sequence, but I'm confused??? Uh, accept with revisions. Needs fuku section.