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All application reviews we can locate are posted so that you, the applicant, may peruse them and see what people have done wrong in the past. We suggest you take advantage of this opportunity, as application reviews are a giant source of ideas, tips, and hints for character creation!

Roanoke Application Rules:

No Japanese characters unless they are businessmen. No usage of Japanese words in names!
No more characters attending Patrick Henry or William Fleming.
No more characters from Europe unless they attend ISAS.
No bird guardians unless you want to get seriously hurt.
No guardian names beginning with P, C, or T.
No more April or May birthdays.
No more humanoid aliens.*
Thank you! :)
* They can appear humanoid after massive surgery, holograms, etc. They just can't be born looking human.

What these results mean:
Awaiting Review - character has not yet been reviewed.
Under Review - character is being considered right now
Reject - there were problems that give us the impression the character would not work in the rpg
Auto-Reject - application was incomplete, power base was wrong, or there were no openings for that kind of senshi
Reject for revision - it showed promise, but needs improvement
Accept with Required Revision - application was accepted, but needs to be submitted to the GMs again within two weeks with GM acceptance on the revisions before you can begin
Accept with revision - you're in, just make a few changes before you begin playing
Accept - this character is approved
Withdrawn - author of app requested the character not be considered

Unplaceable

Silvanus/Hunter Gryphon - Auto-Reject; no senshi group given, no "Silvanus" listed on the page, so without knowing what group he's in, we can't really review him
Iczer-Keltare/Kevin & Iczer-5 - Auto-Reject; no personality, general lack of detail, used copyrighted character, writing sample, wrong application format
Senshi of wisdom/Sara - Auto-Reject; no writing sample, not enough detail, Sailormoon characters, general lack of detail
Jan-ro/Jan-ken - Auto-Reject; catperson, alien, Sailormoon characters, general lack of detail

Angelus Senshi

Sailor Zamael/Eden Snoddy - Accept with Revisions
Sailor Sulphlatus/Charlotte Anne Musgrave - Accept
Uriel/Jonathan Pinchas Tamir - Reject
Sailor Amazarak/Ancelin Aradia Bronwen - Accept
Sailor Raphael/Yaira Cohen - Accept with Revision
Hasmed/Hamm Alucard Crane - Reject
Sailor Amatiel/Hazel Evette Tiernan - Reject for Revision
Gadreel/Gavin Fitzgerald - Reject for Revision
Gadreel/Gavin Fitzgerald - Reject for Revision
Gadreel/Gavin Fitzgerald - Reject for Revision
Leliel Knight/Richard Donovan Farrell - Accept with Revision
Sailor Metatron/Kilierra Lovejoy - Accept with Revision
Akibeel/Jericho Abraham Sinclair - Accept
Kasdeja/Virgil Doyle Walters - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Gabriel/Ian Jeremy Michaels - Accept
Gabriel/Dominick Jeremy Gallagher - Reject for Revision
Kasdeja/Virgil Doyle Waters - Reject for Revision
Ertael Knight/Abernathy Taylor Hicks - Accept
Kokabel/Nhin-Cao Noc - Accept
Armers/Eraen Lovejoy - Accept with Revision
Kasdeja/Virgil Doyle Waters - Withdrawn
Sailor Raphael/Raffaela Aharon - Reject
Gabriel/Troy Bronson Rivers - Reject
Kasdeja/Virgil Doyle Walters - Reject for Revision
Gabriel/Troy Bronson Rivers - Reject
Anthriel Knight/Amari Unmei - (Auto)Reject; no powers, no fuku, no transformation, general lack of detail, orphan, Japanese name
Sailor Haniel/Chieko Izumage - Reject
Israfel/Curt Dema - Reject for Revision; powers, personality, guardian
Metatron/Curt Dema - Reject for Re-application
Sailor Camael/Chloe Venus Love - (Auto)Reject; personality detail, history, names, powers, guardian, no writing sample
Sailor Michael/Mahlkiya Anna Racham - Accept with Revision
Sailor Lucifer/Anastasija Vladmira Yerikov-Dubhan - Accept with Revision
Sailor Azrael/Leah Bara Noe - Accept with Revision
Paschar/Armand Blackwell - Reject; lived in a cave with a dog for ten years, dead parents, entirely unrealistic - this app, while well-written, has unofficially received the "Worst Application Ever" award for two years running. It just goes to show that writing skill isn't everything.
Sailor Azrael/Pristinus Perenne Cubitus - Reject for Revision; change name, work on personality and fuku
Sailor Uriel/Elaine Santos - Accept with Revision (never showed up)
Ardousius/Felice Ina - Accept with Minor Revision
Sailor Armaros/Maureen Arien - Reject for Revision; power and history, "looks weak but is strong" cliche
Avatar Assiel/Nathaniel Jason Carver - Reject for Reapplication; character doesn't fit within the rpg
Sailor Attarib/Yepa Jairo - Reject for Revision; history, shouldn't be an archangel, too fragmented
Sailor Nathanael/Sorcha Alida Keegan - Accept
Thelial/Rufus Paris - Accept (no longer in rpg)
Seraphiel/Casper Sloane - Accept with Revision
Jukar/Donovan "Donny" Cynric - Reject for Revision; contradictory, not very well characterized
Ariel/Amir Adham - Accept with Revision

Astronomia Senshi

Sailor Andromeda/Damia McArdell - Auto-Reject (non-specified slot, no more Galaxia, various, um, issues)
Mimas/Aiden Christopher Piecowi - Reject for Revision
Fornax/Aiden Christopher Piecowi - Auto-Reject, no more Galaxia
Earth Knight/Duncan "Duke" Aiken - Accept With Revisions
Charon/Shannon Sullivan - Accept With Required Revisions (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Alpha Centauri/Raielynne Makiah Sendiri - Auto-reject (no Astra slots, various, um, issues)
Sailor Lyra/Jennifer Williams - Auto-reject (no Astra slots left - but we reviewed you anyway)
Sailor Pluto/Wendy Parker - Accept with Revision
Sailor Mercury/Meryl Raina Dean - Reject for Revision
Sailor Mercury/Meryl Raina Dean - Reject for Revision
Sailor Triangulum/Franzeska Bashir - Accept with Revision
Larissa/Lokia Athena Ferskvann - Reject
Pegasus/Keith Ryder - Reject for Revision
Pegasus/Jacen Lee - Reject for Revision
Rigel/Troy Warrant - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Cassiopeia Kamen/Jeremy Raine Williams - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Rigel/Troy Warrant - Reject for Revision
Sombrero/Haydn Cyningesleah - Accept
Sombrero/Haydn Cyningesleah - Reject for Revision
Sailor Andromeda/Leilani Kai - Reject for Revision
Sailor Aquila/Aria-Lee Hurakane - Reject for Revision; personality, transformation, powers
Fornax/Xanthus "Blaze" Coleman - Reject for Revision
Sailor Andromeda/Anny Sinclair - Reject
Sailor Cassiopeia/Sara - Reject; general lack of detail, no writing sample
Sailor Pisces/Naiya "Nia" Foss - Accept
Sailor Orion/Hidama Karuko - Reject for Revision
Sailor Pisces/Naiya Foss - Reject for Revision; strange girl, fuku, family
Sailor Pisces/Kawazoino Yume - Reject for Revision; Japanese character, missing parent, standard fuku
Sailor Andromeda/Leinani Kai Mapela - Reject for Revision
Sailor Pegasus/Kalea Talitha - Withdrawn
Sailor Andromeda/Riasa Denez - Reject for Revision; alien senshi, history, personality, transformation, powers, guardian
Gemma Knight/Carrick "Rick" Luxington - Accept with Revision
Sailor Juliet/Vivienne Davina Somnium - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Juliet/Vivienne Davina Somnium - Reject for Revision; history, fuku color, name (optional)
Sailor Lyra/Chantal de L'Oiseaux - Reject for Revision; dead parent, standard fuku, personality
Sailor Sculptor/Veta Tiernay - Accept
Sailor Universe/Emma Katherine Celeste McBride - Reject for Revision
Sailor Aldebaran/Rian Arleigh Saied - Accept with Revision
Sailor Draco/Kanene Duka Reese - Accept
Sailor Via Lactea/Lorelei Athelstan - Accept (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Draco/Kanene Duka Reese - Reject; no alien senshi yet
Sailor Sextans/Zaza Grogan - Accept
Sailor Universalis/Maya Minden - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Nemesis Knight/Kokuei Yamio - Reject; Japanese character, application too short
Sailor Haley/Jelena Paradiso - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Haley/Jelena Paradiso - Reject for Revision; history, missing fields, element
Sailor Haley/Jelena Paradiso - Auto-Reject; no writing sample
Horologium Kamen/Theodore "Tibby" Parfett - Accept
Sailor Phoenix/Briony Gryphon - Accept
Sailor Phoenix/Briony Gryphon - Reject for Revision; history, writing sample
Sailor Phoenix/Briony Gryphon - Reject for Info; more detail, writing sample
Saturn/Cassidy Osborne - Auto-Reject for Revision
Sarin Knight/Talib-Ravi Skada - Accept.

Graikos Senshi

Sailor Selene/Eadlin Jelinek - Reject
Sailor Achilles/Megan Gentry - Accept With Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Achilles/Megan Gentry - Reject for Revision
Oceanus/Mikolaj Jeziorouczas - Accept with Revision
Sailor Atalanta/Abriana Natalia Apollo Dante Mazzoni - Accept with Revision
Sailor Atalanta/Isabella Natalia Apollo Dante Mazzoni - Rejected
Poseidon/Murray Liam Oceans - Auto-Reject (no Graikos Deus positions available)
Perdix Metionid - Accept
Perdix Metionid - Reject for Revision
Sailor Oceanus/Ria Evadne - Reject for Revision
Sailor Theia/Adriana Callaghan - Reject for Revision
Sailor Iapetus/Hedy Montmorency - Accept with Revision; powers, school
Sailor Iapetus/Hedy Montmorency - Withdrawn
Orion Knight/Amari Prior - Reject for Revision; history, personality, powers, general grammatical errors
Sailor Helios/Rasol Celeste - (Auto)Reject; no more Graikos Deus positions, numerous spelling errors, history, powers
Sailor Orpheus/Myra Koren - Accept with Revision
Sailor Theia/Adriana Callaghan - Reject for Revision
Hades Knight/Andrew Dark - Auto-Reject; Hades is already taken
Knight of Hectate/Austen Knight Trevel - Auto-Reject; Hecate already taken
Sailor Crius/Cleopatra Infeliz - Accept with Revision
Sailor Astraeus/Willow De l'Etoiles - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Astraeus/Papillon De l'Etoiles - Reject; name, personality detail, fuku description, guardian name, guardian personality, general description
Sailor Nike/Nikhil Coralie - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Nike/Nikhil Dea - Reject for Revision; birthdate, last name, standard fuku, wings, personality
Tyche/Jackson Alexander Reilly - Accept with Revision
Sailor Hecate/Rhiannon Austen - Accept with Revision
Hermes/Liam Markstone - Reject for Revision; school, history detail, personality detail, attacks, guardian
Sailor Apollo/Ellone Strife - Reject; dead parents, used things from Final Fantasy, powers, needs more description
Sailor Mnemosyne/Veri Abrumpo - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Hecate/Rhiannon Austen - Reject for Revision; more detail, less confusion
Sailor Demeter/Amante Printemps - Reject for Revision; more detail
Sailor Persephone/Wilma Jocelyn Verbana - Accept
Sailor Psyche/Suru Yamagu - Reject; guardian, no aliens yet, Japanese character
Sailor Persephone/Wilma Jocelyn Marelda Verbana - Reject for Revision; history, power sphere, school
Sailor Eros/Delilah Surreal - Reject for Revision; history, personality, power, guardian
Sailor Nemesis/June Sentacia - Reject
Hyperion Knight/Zachery Albright - Accept with Revision
Sailor Hecate/Morrigan Donner - Auto-Reject (no writing sample)
Sailor Aphrodite/Letalis Forma - Accept
Sailor Hephaestos/Jace Kellen - Accept
Sailor Nemesis/Lisha Black - Reject; lack of info, grammar, writing
Sailor Hades/Acacia Aisling -Accept
Sailor Hades/Acacia Aisling - Reject for revision; history

Romanus Senshi

Sailor Alecto/Molly Hunter - Reject for Revision
Sailor Ligia/Mallory Rae Channing - Reject
Sailor Terpsichore/Millicent P. Tarkington-Smit - Reject
Sailor Cloacina/Millicent Phyllis Tarkington-Smit - Auto-Reject; no more Romanus Deus
Sailor Terpsichore/Kalama "Kal" Satinka Maluhia - Reject for Revision
Ceres Knight/Heath Rowan Smith - Accept with Revision
Sailor Orcus/Jennifer Enid Sumner - Accept with Revision
Sailor Melpomene/Susan Kent - Accept (no longer in RPG)
Sailor Trivia/Adelle St. Simone-McArthur - Reject
Minerva Knight/Leon Jordan - Reject for Revision
Sailor Mneme/Melanie O'Fernan - Reject for Revision
Sailor Victoria/Maurah Winslow - Reject for Revision
Sailor Urania/Regina Vesper - Accept with Minor Revision
Hercules Kamen/Hunter Gryphon - ... Lost to the Darkest Depths of Time/Space?
Sailor Urania/Regina Vesper - Reject for Revision
Sailor Urania/Regina Vesper - Reject for Revision
Pollux Kamen/Hunter Gryphon - Reject for Revision; history, maybe family, powers
Sailor Thalia/Felicity (Lissie) di Rossi - Accept
Sailor Clio/Priscilla "Pri" Gwidon - Accept with Revision
Aquilo Kamen/Hunter Gryphon - Auto-Reject; no more Romanus Deus positions
Sailor Tisiphone/Theresa Ann Adil - Accept with Revision
Sailor Clio/Priscilla "Pri" Gwidon - Reject for Revision; appearance, fuku , weapon, guardian personality
Sailor Minerva/Maya Roz Baldwin - Reject; writing sample, powers, description
Sailor Nemesis/Lyssandra - Reject; detail, writing sample (Sailormoon chars and Dragonball??)
Sailor Fortuna/Gwyn Kelly - Accept
Kamen Mars/Martin Kemp - Withdrawn
Sailor Fortuna/Gwyn Kelly - Reject for Revision; personality, power, transformation
Dionysus Knight/Bob Bobson - Existantial; not a real application
Sailor Irene/Amina Sukey-Zetta - Accept (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Bacchus/Rayya Ariadne Veritas - Accept
Sailor Dea Dia/Jessica Cannon - Reject for Revision; powers, personality
Sailor Victoria/Faizah Gwidon - Withdrawn
Aesculapius/Asa Jason - Accept
Sailor Dea Dia/Jessica Cannon - Reject; power base, personality, history, senshi awakening
Sailor Aurora/Sadelle Zorah Underwood - Accept with Revision (no longer in rpg)
Sailor Aurora/Sadelle Zorah Underwood - Reject for Revision; history
Sailor Aurora/Talia Maria Johnston - Reject; fuku, dead parent, personality, guardian personality, attack detail, explanation
Neptune Knight/Wade Salter - Accept
Sailor Cupid/Jamie Banning - Accept with Revision

Dark Universe

Captain Obsidian/Lachros Archanon - Reject
Captain Hematite/Bliigurt blup-blup Gilgeblublai Boukwap - Accept with Revision
General Tourmaline/Rose duClaire - Accept with Revision
Captain Alexandrite/Eora Auken - Accept with Revision
Captain Alexandrite/Eora Auken - Reject for Revision
Captain Xenotime/Lyrios S'nariakon Empalmedor - Reject for Revision
General Ametrine/Isyarra Dorat'sike - Accept
General Ametrine/Isyarra Dorat'sike - Reject for Revision
Captain Zaratite/Aenyel Glimyout Asli Denostrop Kwalvit Silkreptin Tralsh - Accept
Captain Alexandrite/Eira Auken - Reject for Revision
Captain Azurite/Xioghanivejn yn Laix - Reject for Revision
Captain Eira Auken - Reject
Captain Alexandrite/Eira Auken - Reject for Revision
General Demantoid/Bjerlo Ge'dall'istra - Accept
Captain Talos Perdison - Accept